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Minty Flavour

Posted: Thu Nov 19, 2009 9:02 pm
by jasmac
Hi, this is my latest effort. What do you think of the colours, should the green be darker? I could also try one in blue.

Cheers

Jason

Re: Minty Flavour

Posted: Thu Nov 19, 2009 10:10 pm
by vrkalak
I like the basic overall layout.

But, yes ... tone down the green a notch or two. It looks like a neon-lime green.

I don't usually like that particular font ... but, it seems to work well, in this application.

I like the way the font and the Mint Leaf compliment each other.

Good job!! Keep up the good work.

Re: Minty Flavour

Posted: Thu Nov 19, 2009 10:59 pm
by jasmac
Hi vrkalak,
Thankyou for your advice, I agree. I made some adjustments and have added it, I left the original as well just so anyone else can see the differences. Thanks again for your kind words.

Cheers

Jason

Re: Minty Flavour

Posted: Fri Nov 20, 2009 6:22 am
by Bit Mad
arashi wrote:The color is much better now :D
I don't like the font too and the whole bevel effect does not really look good.
Also maybe you can try to reduce the logo and text too. They seem to be too large.
:mrgreen:
Agreed -
  • colour is good, it was way too dayglo to start with :D
  • logo too big, with rough edges
  • font is a bit fussy, and with no space between the words
But I don't mind the bevel effect in principle.
It shows good promise, well done 8)

Re: Minty Flavour

Posted: Fri Nov 20, 2009 5:04 pm
by jasmac
Hi all, thanks heaps for all the input. I have made some changes, ditched to font and moved to the traditional mint logo and resized some. Again all input is greatly appreciated.

Cheers

Jason

Re: Minty Flavour

Posted: Sat Nov 21, 2009 12:40 pm
by Bit Mad
Excellent - up to 10/10 now, congrats :D

Re: Minty Flavour

Posted: Sun Nov 22, 2009 6:16 am
by kanishka
Very nice!