Mitsuzero wallpapers

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Mitsuzero wallpapers

Postby mitsuzero » Mon May 18, 2009 7:13 pm

mywallpre.jpg
bars green minted
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my firts version ... ^^
im not pro, is just for fun and proof to my wife,in linux are good alternatives (gimp .....)
i take reviews of it... any....

Edit: .. i changed the subjet ... according to my suggestion!
Edit2:
I uploaded in another server to save topic space
i changed it a bit (ho! )(i decided only put the link because take more space...
there is ...
http://img525.imageshack.us/img525/3706/mywallg.jpg
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Re: No pro Wallpaper!

Postby Acid_1 » Tue May 19, 2009 4:47 am

The logo is kinda fuzzy and I'm not sure what's going on with the stuff behind the text.... Good try :mrgreen:
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Re: No pro Wallpaper!

Postby Ozz » Tue May 19, 2009 4:58 am

yes I would agree that the logo should definitely be worked on, as it is pixellated ? pixallised?

Otherwise good use of colours, and the caption is good.

Good dynamics of band going diagonally across the screen, however, might need the text to be moved.

Good try

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Re: No pro Wallpaper!

Postby mitsuzero » Tue May 19, 2009 10:29 am

i take the logo on this page ! (i didnt redone it)....
and resize it, hmmm i took some ideas to change it... already!
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another one!

Postby mitsuzero » Tue May 19, 2009 12:19 pm

Sry, if i dont finish the other one, i came with other idea to put in this one!
2.jpg
GreenCirclesbounded
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Hope you like. any comment is welcome :) :D :) :? 8) :lol:
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Re: Mitsuzero wallpapers

Postby Acid_1 » Tue May 19, 2009 12:30 pm

I'm about to sound like a jerk for saying two not so great comments in a row. First off, I do like this image very much, well done. But just like your last wallpaper, the logo's a bit off. You have a higher res image, and that is nice. But I think the effect is too much on it. Is there a way to tone the effect on the logo down a bit and keep the BG the same? The "Linux Mint" is very nice, but you should probably shrink "From Freedom Came Elegance" a bit, and spell "Freedom" correctly. But I must say this is a large improvement. Well done.
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Re: Mitsuzero wallpapers

Postby mitsuzero » Tue May 19, 2009 1:38 pm

thanks! for the reply.. i take your suggestion, im working, on it ... and another!
i didnt want to create an ordinary wallpaper.... my next wallpaper post .... urs can see it... xD
i only played with the GIMP .... i downloaded a few plugins and brushes :)
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Re: Mitsuzero wallpapers

Postby mitsuzero » Tue May 19, 2009 7:13 pm

Im finish my second wallpaper (or i think so), hmmm, i put a line, and find a best logo (of linuxmint), i want yours to like it!...
2.jpg
Fix the word Freedom
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and few very changes to my first (if u cant see the links) ....(delicious beverage v1)
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some pants Mentolated(put mint in there)!

Postby mitsuzero » Tue May 19, 2009 10:09 pm

my last(i think) work on this day (sry if i flood this forum, with it.... LOL)
hmmm, hope you enjoy it.... and comment :D
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hmmm i take jernau work to put in this ....
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Re: Mitsuzero wallpapers

Postby zenon38 » Wed May 20, 2009 2:38 am

Hi

Looks really good - as already mentioned just use a vector logo - it will look better but otherwise, it looks like you have a very good eye for making wallpapers. I love the textures and the colors.

Keep up the good work.

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Re: Mitsuzero wallpapers

Postby slider » Wed May 20, 2009 2:40 am

mitsuzero

So far I think the last green one is your best.

You have a very creative use of textures and a love for abstracts I think. Very colorful as well.
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Good job

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Re: Mitsuzero wallpapers

Postby Acid_1 » Wed May 20, 2009 3:01 am

I love this one: http://s3.supload.com/free/greenbasedon ... .jpg/view/

I hope it makes it to the next release. The one with the beverage made me laugh real good. I like it. And the green one with the bar is almost there. Freedom is still spelled incorrectly :shock: :lol:

But yes you are very talented with GIMP. Good work! Keep em coming!
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Re: Mitsuzero wallpapers

Postby Ozz » Wed May 20, 2009 3:10 am

Yep good work. I especially like the one with the butterfly wing effect that you posted on the Tue May 19, 2009 11:13 pm.

One can see that you are still a beginner in gimp, but that you are going to be a master user.
Colour seems to be your medium! Carry on with the great work

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Re: Mitsuzero wallpapers

Postby mitsuzero » Wed May 20, 2009 8:54 am

thanks for the comments, i have more ideas to put in the wallpapers but have take more time now! :)
and i go remake my wallpaper for Felicia(i made it , but i lose it....)
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Re: Mitsuzero wallpapers

Postby mitsuzero » Wed May 20, 2009 8:06 pm

Hello there! again with a "new" wallpaper!
i have this idea (im working in it), but u have an eye on it.
take a look!
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i hope u like it!
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Re: Mitsuzero wallpapers

Postby Ozz » Fri May 22, 2009 7:38 am

I see the logos are now nicely blending in, not fuzzy around the edges. Good progress. Looks professional.

Still in my view, the fonts might need working on, working maybe on the contrast and shadows below.


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